PARENTS HELP

The current topic "should parents always help their children stay out of trouble"? is quite a complicated one. my immediate instinct or answer is to say YES! But thinking it over, in my opinion, it is a very hard decision to make.
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For example, if a parent is aware that his child is committing a crime, should he or she help him or her get out of trouble (at) any cost? If the child is completely misbehaving and being antisocial, should the parents cover it up for him? If godforbid, the child has a mental illness which endangers others, should the parents cover up for him in any case? Or if a child evidently "goes" in the wrong direction, should parents act as if nothing is happening? - That's it? This the body of your essay, a series of questions? Don't you think you should try and answer some of them at least? This is an opinion essay - where is your opinion?????

To sum it up, I think that in my opinion parents should help their children stay out of trouble a lot. Not always. Because help without any condition, will eventually cause harm instead of help. So do your best to help the children stay out of trouble, but . Not always and no unconditional help.

You have a good opening and ending, but no body in this essay. Please reorganize your work. Please note your garde is still 75.

Daphna.

Tal Wirzberger

kasam

to all the children who are under the threat of the kasams day and night.
although we live far away from you'we care about you,we understand your fears and together with our families aesupport the I.D.F in thus war against the hamas.We hope that the war will endsoon anduoy willbe able to leave the shelters and live asnormal children, study and play, without fears.
with love tal wirzberger.