school activities, right or wrong?

Visiting the Tel-aviv university, listeing to lectures, watching films and going to the theater are a part of the montly activies that take part in our school.

In my opinion, these activities are very important for us.
it's really fun, interesting and exciting to share such activies with friends, for example, listening to a lecture which deals with drug addiction. Moreover, going out together makes us behave more friendly because in thr activities we all long day togther and we learn about each other.

In addition, we learn new things which we don't study at school. This way we enrich our knowledge. It's different from the school routine. There is no doubt that school activities include both studying and fun.

Still, I would like things to improve. I would like the teacher to choose more interesting lectures. We are sometimes bored by a lecture given to us twice or more. What's more, I would like our teacher to choose a lecturer who knows how to lecture. Sometimes, the lectures aren't suitable for our age. Also, I wouldn't like to visit the same place . In my opinion visiting are creative and enjoyable in because we are learn and improve are skills and things that will help we in the future.


Tal wirzberger

This is much better. Still, you will have to clarify a point you made in your second paragraph. Good work, nevertheless. (85)
Daphna.